The Director

[Eliud25]

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 09, 2002 10:22 PM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>

[eddie]

well.....dont give up your day job.

[Generic Skinhead]

Thats awful. Put it in format at least.

[Eliud25]

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 09, 2002 10:23 PM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>

[ac_01]

Ow! It hurts my eyes to read it... no joke. [img]graemlins/cry.gif[/img]

After about 10lines i went cross-eyed.... [img]eek.gif[/img]

[SoulJacker]

Put it in *script* format ya poon...then someone might actually give a **** / or read it...

[Yammeryammeryammer]

Invest in a thesaurus. There are more words than cool, man, fun and good. I don't particularly care about the format, it was understandable despite. But that is just because I only write things I intend to direct, and don't like the official format.

[Eliud25]

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 09, 2002 10:23 PM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>

[eddie]

utter cr@p .

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ July 03, 2002 05:09 AM: Message edited by: eddie ]</font>

[Generic Skinhead]

I'm not sure where mcallen is, but I hope it's not in an english speaking country. Well done for finishing it and all, but...it's a very poor idea to begin with and its Excruciating to read.

What is it with the standard of English on this board? Some folk can barely string a sentance together!